The animation is beautiful, and the backgrounds are gorgeous. It looks almost professionally done.
The way colours are used makes it obvious that the animator knows what they're doing. There are some minor pacing issues in the fight scenes but that's basically nit-picking.
There are places where more sound effects would've immersed the viewer into the world you've set up if they were there; think more about environmental-acted sound-effects like stepping on sand and sliding across it or a whoosh as a person is tossed through the air.
Obviously there's also the voice acting and script stuff, but that could be easily fixed with an editor or such. But pilot-wise, it doesn't do much to introduce the viewers to the world it's in or the story.
Perhaps that would be something well to look into.
I look forward to seeing more from you.
Thanks a lot for your feedback :D it's truly appreciated
(PSSSST! They don't get the joke!)
I feel that one should never zoom in that close with a sprite animation unless the sprites are really detailed, but that's just me probably.
The advertisement I watched was longer than this animation (Which is bad) and the joke was hard to see for most of us (As you can see in the rest of the reviews.)
I got the joke and at most I can give you 1 & 1/2 stars.
Basically, the animation was smooth, but 2zoom4me & too short... AND your humor is hard to understand in this short.
Also, my computer monitor is shit so I cant see half of what I'm typing. This took 20 min+ to type because of said reason. Dx
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